light and dark and where they meet

VerbTribe has been an extraordinary journey for me as a teacher, and for those who have joined it. As we close our first 37-day journey into writing, I am featuring writing from VerbTribe members here on 37days. Here Maya Stein answers the prompt from Day 12, where I asked the VerbTribe to write about a certain photograph (one they grew to know and love deeply) only this time to merely write about the lights and darks of it, the places where they met. Maya’s amazing writing can be found here. Her poetry is featured in my book, Creative is a Verb, as well.

light and dark and where they meet

In France, on the lawn of my father’s old millhouse,
the afternoon sun drew a shadow twice my height,
and I swayed gently to tilt and swell the shape.
There were years behind me, pools of history marked
by disassembly and irresolution. I felt always on the verge
of locating something promising and permanent.
The narratives of love would buoy everything at first,
then flatten the landscape down to inches.
Now, old couples walking the river path passed by me without a word.
The breeze lifted my growing hair, then settled it down again.
I wondered if there would ever be a place where
light and dark would meet on friendlier terms,
doors greeting windows, yeses nudging no’s
like sleepy horses, failure flirting with joy,
winter asking wildflowers on a date. Before me,
the patch lengthened again, sky inching toward evening.
I stood there, equipoised between what had come and gone,
and the strange uncertainties of living. There was nothing to do
but watch and wait.

-Maya Stein

About Patti Digh

Patti Digh is an author, speaker, and educator who builds learning communities and gets to the heart of difficult topics. Her work over the last three decades has focused on diversity, inclusion, social justice, and living and working mindfully. She has developed diversity strategies and educational programming for major nonprofit and corporate organizations and has been a featured speaker at many national and international conferences.

9 comments to " light and dark and where they meet "
  • Oh, this gives me goosebumps … because I adore Maya’s work, and also because I have taken SO many photographs of myself like that, my shadow, the defining characteristics of my face blotted out in favor of the shadow I cast.  Thank you, thank you.  xox

  • Who hasn’t been tempted to take one of these self portrait shadow photos? Ah, but to match the photo with poetic words that stop me and make me think, words that swirl and climb and drop at just the right moments. Lovely! I have long been an admirer of Maya’s poetry. More loveliness!

  •  “yeses nudging no’s / like sleepy horses” — What a beautiful, evocative image! Maya, thanks for writing this poem, and Patti, thanks for sharing it.

  • ‘I felt always on the verge of locating something…….inches’ can relate to it, but could never have said it so movingly!

  • Absolutely wonderful!

  • Terry

    Oh.  Just a long sighed ‘oh.’  Nice to live in this poem for a few moments this morning.  In fact, I have lived in this poem for years.  Nice to have it finally show up.  Thank you, Maya.

  • Susan

    How I love this and have enjoyed your beautiful writing in VerbTribe! 

  • “There were years behind me, pools of history marked

    by disassembly and irresolution. I felt always on the verge

    of locating something promising and permanent.”

    So beautifully familiar. If I were a poet I would have written that. Since I am me I will copy it long hand as a recognition. The Verb Tribe has taught me much, and mostly it is the recognition of self in other that stays with me and makes me live.

    Thank You Maya and Patti!

    XO

  • Maya Stein

    Patti – Thank you for everything that you gave us in this class. I felt taken care of and at the same time encouraged to find new freedom in my voice. My writing has changed because of it, and my seeing too, my openness to see. The lessons you offered are tucked in my back pocket, and I will keep carrying them with me everywhere. This is beyond writing, of course. But you already know that…

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